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It Was A Beautiful Sunset A Poem
It Was A Beautiful Sunset A Poem He said it was a beautiful sunset But he was not seeing it with me He was seeing it with another woman So why was he mentioning it? As a taunt? To needle my self esteem? Or just to mention a natural phenomenon? I know I was reading too much into it. As is my wont. But how could I not? I wanted to be the woman Who was by his side. I wanted to be the woman He was newly finished Making love with Who was sleeping nearby. I wanted to be the woman Who was with him At that moment Who awoke precisely To his words "It's a beautiful sunset." Instead I was miles away And reading a text While another woman slept Off his lovemaking prowess. I am done. As you can imagine. I can't beat myself up With his cavalier treatment Of women who serve their Momentary purpose. I could be among them I would be no better Or no worse Just one of them. And it would hurt. For I would want more. And he would move on To someone who has something I don't possess. Whatever that is There is a long list. And while the head was engaged And while the heart was primed And while the sex could have been great. There would have been something Absent on his end. A sense of loyalty and devotion That I don't know he could Ever show anyone. Yes, I am talking about love. He told me he could not be My forever love once. When he said that I should have Walked away. No, make that run. The statement "It's a beautiful sunset." Something I should walk off into And not back Thank you for the symbolism. I still wish for a kiss goodbye. Independently Romantic Sounds Better Than Lonely |
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This goes along with my last poem... Independently Romantic Sounds Better Than Lonely
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9/15/2019 9:13 pm |
Very cool
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Very cool Independently Romantic Sounds Better Than Lonely
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9/15/2019 10:18 pm |
Perhaps he just couldn’t love 2 people at the same time- I’m done too💕
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9/15/2019 11:46 pm |
it was a beautiful sunset and your want was for him it is a beautiful sunset and your id is yours again it is a beautiful sunrise and you are ready to start again this reply was written in time lapse feelings there is a world of difference between insanity and stupidity
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9/16/2019 3:37 am |
What an amazing poem! You are one hell of a poet!
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You have to walk before you run. You did try and stay the distance. It's wrong to make you feel glum. He was leading you a merry dance.
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