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Falling into  

senfully 55F  
540 posts
8/10/2021 7:16 am
Falling into


Falling into
written July 7th, 2021

always a
never a
without a face
suspended in this twilight
no-where and in no-time
floating in air
my<b> faith </font></b>is
the tight grasp
keeping you from
falling into the abyss
where are crushed
like fallen fruit—
or am I keeping you
from falling into grace?

senfully 55F  
443 posts
8/10/2021 9:37 am

One of the pleasures of my strange memory is finding unexpected and unremembered things written in my notebook. This poem is from one of those.

I try to heal, myself and parts inside. It is difficult to imagine how to do things differently, and this is stable at least.

Alternate ending:
or is it grace
you would fall into
if I let go?


Ultraviolet_Sol 43M
622 posts
8/10/2021 12:05 pm

This is utterly profound Sen. You inspire me with your courage & daring.

Pertaining to the two potential endings... I think that the "Alternate ending" reads more in the passive voice... which may work better in this instance? Something to consider, perhaps.

Very nice to read you.

*. *. *


kamaruhl3 63M
4985 posts
8/10/2021 5:51 pm

boy your words make me think thank you very much


69ereatwetpussy 61M
6774 posts
8/15/2021 4:19 am

I would not let you fall
Cradle you in my arms
Cry no more
Grow to a woman
For get the past
It is over
Long forgotten
The new is ahead of you
Step forward reach out
I'm standing right in front of you
Come into my arm
Feel my strength
I well not let you fall again
Your the sweet fruit from a strong tree
Ment to be shared
Let yourself go you will see.............


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