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Turmoil: A Song  

bustinout20202 67F  
806 posts
11/16/2020 11:25 am
Turmoil: A Song


I wrote this one night after some bedtime conversation. I picture it as a country song, with me singing in some dark bar, sitting on a stool, dressed in a black tank top and overalls, cowboy hat down over my eyes...crooning the words. check the first comment to see the song.

Thanks y'all for the read!!

~~~" Someone I loved once gave me a box full of darkness. It took me years to understand that this too, was a gift." --Mary Oliver~~~


bustinout20202 67F  
1080 posts
11/16/2020 11:31 am

Turmoil

Refrain:
You say I brought the turmoil
When I upset your perfect life
Boy you make my blood boil
Cuz I may not be your girlfriend
But I damn sure am your wife

Verse 1
I didn’t see it comin’
All the years we’ve both been through
I had faith and trust believin’
Had no idea you’d been deceivin’
With this path you thought to choose

You said you thought you had it made
Got your music, your chick, your life
Then somebody upset the apple cart
A careless paper brought the strife

[Refrain]

Verse 2
You had to know this day would come
When confrontation would rear its ugly head
With words and screams and dashed up dreams
Both wishin’ the other one dead.

He really thought he’d had it made
The complications were simple when
With a home, a wife, a family
And a little on the side now & then

[Refrain]

Verse 3
But tables do turn in life my friend
And how are we to know
That the wife could maybe understand
And the girlfriend demands she go?

[Bridge]
Ah, but I will not go easily
Into that sweet goodnight
For I awoke to my man’s desire
Sorry chickie, I’m ready for a fight.

[Refrain]
Fade out

~~~" Someone I loved once gave me a box full of darkness. It took me years to understand that this too, was a gift." --Mary Oliver~~~


mufdiver69er2 63M  
1953 posts
11/16/2020 12:34 pm

i can see reba doin it at the cma,s..

woop woop


bustinout20202 replies on 11/16/2020 1:53 pm:
Ha Ha! Was thinking more like Dolly! thanks for the read!

CleavageFan4U 66M
69374 posts
11/16/2020 12:38 pm

WOW, how how poignant! Seems you've got real talent.

Let me know if you need a wardrobe consultant when you move to the stage - I've got some definite ideas in that area.

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bustinout20202 replies on 11/16/2020 1:52 pm:
ha ha! Something in Cobalt Blue, I would imagine!

easy_going2014 57M
14366 posts
11/16/2020 9:52 pm

that is well written

thanks for sharing your other posts first

it gives one a greater appreciation for your words tonight

hmm

be safe

Barbra Streisand & Barry Gibb - "What Kind Of Fool"

There was a time when we were down and out
There was a place when we were starting over
We let the bough break
We let the heartache in
Who's sorry now
There was a world when we were standing still
And for a moment we were separated
And then you found him
You let the stranger in
Who's sorry now
Who's sorry now
What, what kind of fool (what kind of fool)
Tears it apart (tears it apart)
Leaving me pain and sorrow
Losing you now
Wonderin' why
Where will I be tomorrow

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bustinout20202 replies on 11/17/2020 6:37 pm:
Thank you Sir! I knew you'd find an apropos song for this! Stay Tuned!

CleavageFan4U 66M
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11/17/2020 6:03 am

bustinout20202 replies on 11/16/2020 3:52 pm:
ha ha! Something in Cobalt Blue, I would imagine!

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OH NO - the only way you're getting cobalt blue is to steal them away in person!

You're basic idea of an outfit was spot on, though I'd replace the overalls with tight jeans, ensure the black top was low-cut, and that the hat didn't hide that luscious hair too much.

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bustinout20202 replies on 11/17/2020 6:38 pm:
Welll, if you insist!

hmmiwonder2 69M  
9 posts
12/4/2020 3:24 pm

You can easily change the feminine to the masculine.

Well, baby used to stay out all night long
She made me cry, she done me wrong
She hurt my eyes open, that's no lie
Tables turn and now her turn to cry
Because I used to love her, but it's all over now
Because I used to love her, but it's all over now

Well, she used to run around with every man in town
She spent all my money, playing her high class game
She put me out, it was a pity how I cried
Tables turn and now her turn to cry
Because I used to love her, but it's all over now
Because I used to love her, but it's all over now

Well, I used to wake in the morning, get my breakfast in bed
When I'd gotten worried she'd ease my aching head
But now she's here and there, with every man in town
Still trying to take me for that same old clown
Because I used to love her, but it's all over now
Because I used to love her, but it's all over now
Because I used to love her, but it's all over now


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